Fragmented Critques

Emily: pretty trippy, im not sure i like the steady beat of the drums and the techno-like music in the beginning. i love the sped up voice, so weird! lol just enough of it.... i can't believe that song was on the prelinger archives. i like this one better, i like how the horn in Empire is repeated.

Ryan: so far pretty musical, you did a very good job making music out of different song clips. very mellow piece, not a head ache. I like the voices a lot, I wish they faded out a lil better and didn't abruptly go out. the first was a bit rocky but the second was smooth. Nice looping, goes and ends seamlessly.

Joel: very musical, im glad it breaks down cause i 1st i was thinking of a techno song. Ah loved the 2nd, it really hearkens back to an era. the bongos seem really random, i like it. where in the in the original score i wonder?

Lesley: The Sun is going to blow up was really funny, bc of the its gonna rain/ pretty techno like but it was funny. I really like the second with the rainstorm or whatever that is, it sound like something rolling or exploding i like it, its very abstract. ahh windshield wipers, i was off. lol

I really like the Twitter one, i almost want to hear the "urr" in twitturr that they annunciation so profoundly. Omg obsessed with the Snow Storm one with the chorus in the back, ob-sessed. I really like these two alot.

Jim: its really good i like the juxtaposition but at the same time, the English person is referring to the eastern ppl's chants. awesome. the voices were intense. C.S. Lewis's Jabberwoki poem. awesome, i like how the poem flows in and out. i almost wished you didn't tell people it was that poem, but the random lady telling ppl its in the public domain is funny.

Kirstin: techno, very techno disco musical. very relaxing hawiian music typre.

KT: i'm such a sucker for the opera pieces, but i like the inverted quality you've given the voices and music. i love the arrangement you did. the fart noices or whatever those art. this one's very abtract, i love it. the voice is very calm too, i love the storm. this one was one of the best i think, very good!

Gabby: I love betty boop and totally forgot. but i loved the idea of a broken record kinda like i did. your second is very ominous i wonder what he is saying. the repetition is nice, you lost me a little bit when you combined the fast and slow voice but i liked when the music tied it in the end.

Sara: I really get the heartbeat feel with your sound piece. I like this one much better than the 1st only bc you can barely distinguish whats going on. i like how you abstracted and alienated the sound.